This time, I'm not starting with the drop :p Actually attempting to make a melodic thing happen. We'll see.
Version 2:
Ok. Have up to the drop. Not totally sure about the drop itself, or the first half of the build up. But the end of the buildup is probably the best I've done yet.
Version 3: Drop get. I like where this is going now. Not so lost.
Version 4: more drop, also chorus + Guitar solo. GUITAR SOLOOOO The transitions are still terrible and what not
Version 5: This is the entire structure. Now all that's left is to make the bits work right and make all the transitions cool.
Menagerie: Done!