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[lundblad016]

Hello guys!

I'm not gonna explain to much here, but basicly I need some help from all of you creative devils out there. =)

I'm making a tropical House track this time, and I'm done with the first drop and Intro, but there is something lacking that I cant figure out what it is.

After 35 seconds I want something playing in the background to give a little varriation since I decided too loop the guitar pattern 3 times before any big change is happening. There is a toms pattern coming in at 35 seconds but I dont feel that they'r enough of a change.

This thing doesnt necessarily have to be playing in the drop. Its just to keep things a little interesting before the drop hits.
I've tried alot of things but I cant find anything that fits or sound good.
If you want to help me drop a comment, And if you want I can give you credit in the description of the track.

If this track turns out good Im going to send it around to a few YT promoters, Soundcloud promoters and im going to submit it to my local radio channel.

[e-Gloomy-nations]

after 35 seconds, I would use a nice pad if I w...

[einfachfelix]

gloomer is absolutely right! it needs a pad wit...

[lundblad016]

Thanks guys for the comments. First of all I d...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Your pad sounds very quiet, you could automate ...

[Kryptyk Mynd]

Nice melody. There needs to be a 'rise and fall...

[lundblad016]

Here is an update of the track. I tried to la...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

beautiful, better

[IDCUWAN]

Thats some good stuff. Really nice and clear, I...

[lundblad016]

@ IDCUWAN Thanks for the feedback! Since I'm p...

[IDCUWAN]

lundblad016 wrote:@ IDCUWAN Thanks for the feed...

[Mert Mert]

Throw a choir type voice in. and then A LOT mor...

[Mert Mert]

haha only heard the first post. Its really comi...

[lundblad016]

Im having a hard time adding more stuff to the ...

[lundblad016]

Oh yeah I requested a mastering sample from a f...

[Thunderpunch]

As far as I can hear in that mastering sample I...

[tranceproducer]

if id hear this on a big radio station, with a ...

[lundblad016]

Thank you tranceproducer! =) Yeah I would love...