Dancing with Ghosts - What Was Found in the Wreckage

[Rammstein13579]

My newest track I've completed would really like some feedback on what needs to be fixed or tweaked. I would appreciate it thank you FL community!

Verse 1:
Driving home at night I see
Feels like something's watching me
Light in the sky above my car
Racing towards me like a star
Feel the fear come down like rain
As the ship it captures me
I look at my life and start to think
When will something rescue me

Chorus:
But I don't want you to go
Not see your face now
But I don't want you to go
Not see your face inside my head

Verse 2:
Glowing
In an embryo I'm clean
Right before me is my mother
She informs me without speech
I am finally clean

[e-Gloomy-nations]

that was absolutely perfect.. Cool vocals man, ...

[Ottischo]

wow! great song, i love the vocals

[Rammstein13579]

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[Alter-Fox]

Pretty cool. The lyrics are beautiful and just...

[Rammstein13579]

haha sinister is my specialty

[Rammstein13579]

<3

[Alter-Fox]

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