Metalcan ft #tom10 | wip | Rock/metal

[fivefingers]

Hi,

this is a wip i've been working on for quite a while, feel a bit stuck.

looking for comments both regarding song structure and mixing.

i play the bass, the rythm guitars that is heard during the first couple mins, and the lead guitar melody in the beginning. #tom10 plays the rythm guitars that comes in at the 1minute mark, and the guitar solo that starts at around 2 mins, and goes on for the rest of the track.

i am bit unsure for instance if i should keep the lead in the beginning, or can it, if there are parts of the solo that should be cut, lots of issues really.

/bjorn

edit: revised the revised version..

changes from original,

kick lowered an octave
less overhead on snare
various volume changes
shortened
more variation to drums
and some other stuff

final update, finished thing:

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Hey Bjorn, I wouldn't worry if I were you, I've...

[fivefingers]

thx gloomer. sometimes you listen to a track so...

[bloodcool]

Hi fivefingers, Cool track. I would work on th...

[fivefingers]

thx bloodcool, this is quite useful. i´ll check...

[cmsKarambit]

I know nothing about writing rock music, althou...

[Zknight78]

Nice playing! Overall, I think the performance ...

[JackySwing]

Hello, I'm a fan of metal so I'm glad to see ...

[fivefingers]

Thx for all these comments! taken most of them ...

[fivefingers]

Finally finished this thing, just some cleaning...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

hey fivefingers, this was absolutely a beauty. ...

[fivefingers]

thx alot gloomer!