Hey peeps,
I'm stuck with this one, I'm not really happy with it.
What should I do better please ?
Thanks in advance !
Sometimes, when you're going to a concert or so, you're being approached by a dark figure, he wants you to join the Church of Scientology or some other dark organisations such as the Illuminati, they want to recrute you. Mostly the victims are very young people.
EDIT : Version 2 online :
* made it more energetic
* changed the melodic elements
* added a snare
* added "we want your eye" vocal
* used other drums
* used other percussion
* pumped up the volume of the bass
* added a lead at 1:16
* changed the intro
* used the melody at the end before the break too
* adjusted some volume levels
* etc...
EDIT : It's finished thanks to your help.. Check out Steevm's version too, it's awesome