Gloomer - Titles For Dummies (NEW TRACK thanks to you)

You want to know more about this matrix we're living in.. Just Google and investigate my songtitles, you can all find them here :

gloomer2000.bandcamp.com/music

I'm wondering what I can do better though, what do you think ? Got any comments ? I still can change the track.

Thanks in advance !

Cheers and PEACE !!

UPDATE : track is finished thanks to your help !

Gloomer, I absolutely LOVE this track! I think...

Nice work Gloomer! I really like those plucks a...

I like that, almost poppy in its own way. Love...

This is a goodie... Long intro, but not boring ...

No real comments except very nice track! Nice f...

Chipps wrote:Gloomer, I absolutely LOVE this tr...

clint wrote:Nice work Gloomer! I really like th...

donkeytugger wrote:I like that, almost poppy in...

steevm wrote:This is a goodie... Long intro, bu...

Malcolm D wrote:No real comments except very ni...

nice track again, again i would like you to up ...

Thanks for the tip fivefingers !! I've layered ...

I think the kick sounds better and that already...

hi, at the end you could add a second voice to ...

steevm wrote:I think the kick sounds better and...

sql_error_uname wrote:hi, at the end you could ...

fivefingers wrote:Oh my! happened 12 thousand y...

You gotta be kidding.

Dude, I love it, very nice house track! Lots of...

A great one, so many different sections, always...

Really cool start from the pads. Also the synth...

shtreebun wrote:Dude, I love it, very nice hous...

ZakBS wrote:A great one, so many different sect...

Ibins27 wrote:Really cool start from the pads. ...

Update, version 3 : * Put less "highs" on the ...

Gloomer wrote: You want to know more about thi...

Thanks a lot J T, I really appreciate your visi...

Great work! I was listening on my HS7 and BX10 ...

peace my friend, and thank you so much for drop...

@Gloomer. Sounds great! Although I must admit t...

The mix is perfect to me but it sounds super qu...

I like that arabic influence btw

mpetaia90 wrote:@Gloomer. Sounds great! Althoug...

JackySwing wrote:The mix is perfect to me but i...

JackySwing wrote:I like that arabic influence b...

Version 4 online : Thanks y'all !!

Listened to version 1 then version 4. Definitel...

Audio Warfare wrote:Listened to version 1 then ...

FINAL VERSION NOW ONLINE :

I love the track. Simple, mixed great, and amaz...

Gloomer wrote:mpetaia90 wrote:@Gloomer. Sounds ...

Jhudstudio.com wrote:I love the track. Simple, ...

mpetaia90 wrote:Thanks Gloomer ahaha. I got a f...