"Hoping For You" - DJ LFD - HipHop/R&B (WIP) [Updated 11/13] which is better?

[Michael Mckeon]

hello people, i started to get into some trap but i like R&B wayyyy better... not sure what genre this is but with the right vocalist and lyrics it will be much better, but the into is still a WIP, and it repeats, because i haven't added more layers, spent an hour and a half thinking this up and making it

ideas on filling out the intro.... should i use morecomplex piano sounds, or should add a pad, other suggestions?

Any advice will be good, these patterns are much longer than the usual, and yes i will add risers and drops, hi-hats, better percussion to mix things up as well:
[Edited] took out the bad lead after the piano and quantized by hand... sounds better now. few minutes it will be done, as a WIP.

NOT SURE IF IT'S FINISHED, BUT I MYSELF LIKE IT ALOT BETTER, COULDN'T HAVE DONE IT WITHOUT YOUR ADVICE, BTW I SKIPPED THE PERCUSSION MIXING AND MIXED THE VERSE LEADS INSTEAD

[Michael Mckeon]

updated: much better now, sorry

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Not bad Michael mate ! If you will do the thing...

[fivefingers]

Michael Mckeon wrote:hello people, i started to...

[steevm]

That's a really cool bouncy synth line you have...

[Michael Mckeon]

Thanks guys, i'll do some thinking on you thoug...

[Michael Mckeon]

didn't come out right, i'll fix it tomorrow, i'...

[Michael Mckeon]

Added the remix to the second post so you don't...

[steevm]

I think the lead synth sound is close enough, b...

[Michael Mckeon]

i introduced the second paino apregg earlier, u...

[steevm]

I'm still liking the glitchy piano, it's defini...

[steevm]

Btw, I prefer the remix version in terms of ove...

[Michael Mckeon]

Thanks, i'm planning oon re-arrnging the timing...