Don't Pick on Me / First FL studio song!

[Stardustlegend]

https://clyp.it/x2rpy4f3

This was my first project in FL and I've worked on it for a few weeks spread out over months, and I am really proud of it o3o I also made a zgameeditor visualizer lyric video for it but I'm not sure where to post that exactly on the forums XP I'm also not exactly sure what genre of music this would be considered to be? Comment down below what genre it sounds like to you

Anyway, I've actually been working on this song before FL studio but I bought FL to make better songs with it. So once i finally got producer edition the first thing I reworked was this composition, and I'm glad I did >3< This song is supposed to have vocals sung over it (the song actually tells a story infact XP) but since I'm not that great a singer i just used a synth in place.

Anyway, please tell me what you think, any feedback, criticisms or comments are welcome. I would also like to know what genre you think this sounds like and if you would know anyone who would be willing to sing the lyrics I made for the song. I hope ya like! o3o

EDIT: Here is the Lyric Video! >3<

[donkeytugger]

Interesting stuff and quite different, sort of ...

[steevm]

It's music for a mid-90s or so computer adventu...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

wow man, this was already fantastic.. Wouldn't ...

[Stardustlegend]

steevm wrote:It's music for a mid-90s or so com...

[Stardustlegend]

Gloomer wrote:wow man, this was already fantast...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

amazing.. amazing lyrics too.. And yes, you c...

[Stardustlegend]

Gloomer wrote:amazing.. amazing lyrics too.. ...

[steevm]

Stardustlegend wrote:Yeah with the MIDI-soundin...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Stardustlegend wrote:Thank you, i really apprec...

[Stardustlegend]

donkeytugger wrote:Interesting stuff and quite ...