Summer Dance Project - Not The Right Way [Pop]

[summerdanceproject]

This is my first Rock Song. I hope that it fits for the first attempt so far from the harmonic side. Would be glad about criticism and suggestions for improvement. My vocals are like most time not the best;-)





UPDATE:
The song has since been converted into a pop song. The latest version can be found at the bottom

[steevm]

I think your vox sound better with less FX. It ...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

The very first beginning and the guitar solo ne...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks Stevm and thanks Gloomer ! Im back to ...

[steevm]

charliekay74 wrote: Normally i put the vocals p...

[summerdanceproject]

it took me hours to analyse the problems with t...

[MvR]

charliekay74 wrote: Normally i put the vocals ...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks MvR for your thoughts about panning. I w...

[Michael Mckeon]

Really Simple Vocals, much lie German People, t...

[steevm]

You might want to remove that reference Michael...

[summerdanceproject]

Ive got too many problems with the guitar versi...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Better, less dissonance.. I start to like this ...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks Gloomer, MvR and Stevm for the Hints so ...

[summerdanceproject]

New Version:

[steevm]

I think that's a good step in the right directi...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks stevm for your opinion. I had two manage...

[steevm]

charliekay74 wrote:I had to move into a new fla...