Fame Sold Out | WIP, need ideas & singer | Disco Pop-Rock

[DerD]

Hello!

I am just coming to an end with my creativity.
Everything sits where it belongs, but some elements that may make it a good pop-rock-disco-song are missing.
I cant think of samples or instruments i might add for transitions and accents.
Also, as I am no singer and native english speaker, there is a big problem:
No songtext, no singer available.

It is my first song exclusively to this genre. I am testing out many genres for learning purpose. Maybe thats part of the problem?

You might give it a listen and bring on some serious ideas. Thanks in advance. I am curious about new additions!

No Mixing, No Mastering, but applied stereo placement and reverb for each group of instruments.

[e-Gloomy-nations]

haha, mighty fine track.. Only a few remarks : ...

[Aleix Fontanet]

The beat is quite nice. The first build up is a...

[steevm]

I like it! Intro didn't bug me, maybe I had dif...

[LEFT_91]

sounds to dry for my taste more fx please and...

[DerD]

Thanks so far for your reviews To Sum it up: ...