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CDObjectivist
 
Apr 21, 2012 (23:48)
Lift.mp3


This is a pretty good example of my particular style and taste, I feel like I could be doing better. I know part of that is learning the program better, but I hoped maybe I could get some tips? Let me know what you guys think!
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Last edited by CDObjectivist on Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:12 am, edited 3 times in total.

O-cactus
 
Apr 22, 2012 (3:33)
I would start by putting a little reverb on th...

CDObjectivist
 
Apr 22, 2012 (12:42)
Thanks for giving it a listen. I put the reverb...

O-cactus
 
Apr 22, 2012 (17:42)
try lowering the volume and EQing "strong&...

CDObjectivist
 
Apr 22, 2012 (21:05)
Thanks, I'll try that.

Its Clipping
 
Apr 23, 2012 (17:11)
This sounds really good man.Melodic and harmoni...
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O-cactus
 
Apr 24, 2012 (2:20)
I have to 2nd the suggestion to put one reverb ...

CDObjectivist
 
Apr 24, 2012 (7:00)
Thanks guys, these are some awesome tips, I am ...

CDObjectivist
 
Apr 24, 2012 (8:12)
Lift2.mp3I posted the second version of the son...
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PanterAnt
 
Apr 26, 2012 (18:50)
I like this song.Good beats. keep it up would l...

CDObjectivist
 
Apr 28, 2012 (17:11)
Thanks PanterAnt, Check me out on SoundCloud: h...

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