Where can I improve?

[CDObjectivist]

Lift.mp3

This is a pretty good example of my particular style and taste, I feel like I could be doing better. I know part of that is learning the program better, but I hoped maybe I could get some tips? Let me know what you guys think!

[O-cactus]

I would start by putting a little reverb on th...

[CDObjectivist]

Thanks for giving it a listen. I put the reverb...

[O-cactus]

try lowering the volume and EQing "strong&...

[CDObjectivist]

Thanks, I'll try that.

[Its Clipping]

This sounds really good man.Melodic and harmoni...

[O-cactus]

I have to 2nd the suggestion to put one reverb ...

[CDObjectivist]

Thanks guys, these are some awesome tips, I am ...

[CDObjectivist]

Lift2.mp3I posted the second version of the son...

[PanterAnt]

I like this song.Good beats. keep it up would l...

[CDObjectivist]

Thanks PanterAnt, Check me out on SoundCloud: h...