At first i feelt this was so great, but now, i don't know anymore.
What do you guys think, i'm trying to get a track signed, and this is another attempt, someone said "try to be original", i don't know if this is original, but at least it doesn't sound like any "act" i can think of.
Maybe Eric Pryds a little with the bell pluck? I don't know.
Do you like it?
Edit: Deleted, gonna finish it, then i'll maybe upload it again!