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ManifestSilver
Fri May 09, 2008 2:52 am

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Dissolution Solution - - - -Finally a track I am happy with!

This track is roughly based on the poem "Death of the Ball Turret Gunner" by Randall Garrell.

From my mother's sleep I fell into the State,
And I hunched in its belly till my wet fur froze.
Six miles from earth, loosed from its dream of life,
I woke to black flak and the nightmare fighters.
When I died they washed me out of the turret with a hose.

The song follows some of the signiture craft techniques of the poem, and I also recite it at the end, for random listeners to understand what it was about. It turned out very nice, I think! I just started(maybe finished) it tonight, but I'm very happy with the way it turned out.


It's a strange mix of Hiphop and IDM, with orchestral elements.. I guess? You all know I'm horrible with genres!


Comments and Critique make me love you long time!

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AliGaTor
Fri May 09, 2008 4:24 am

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boh nice punchy bassdrum little bit sad the so...

ManifestSilver
Fri May 09, 2008 4:26 am

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Yeah, It's hard for me to avoid making tracks s...

sdamian
Fri May 09, 2008 8:21 pm

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It's pretty good Anti! Are these all going to s...

Darcal
Sat May 10, 2008 1:39 am

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Well worth listening to. I like this a lot. Uni...

Gordonlc
Sat May 10, 2008 11:35 pm

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hey very nice track. has a strong feel to it th...

ManifestSilver
Sat May 10, 2008 11:42 pm

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G_Lewis_C wrote:hey very nice track. has a stro...

Davidaase
Sun May 11, 2008 8:09 am

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This sounds pretty cool so far, but it's not re...

ManifestSilver
Sun May 11, 2008 7:18 pm

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Thanks for the musical advice, though I'm aware...

ManifestSilver
Sun May 11, 2008 7:37 pm

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The strange "Drive" it has is based u...

jasonbrianmerrill
Sun May 11, 2008 7:53 pm

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sounds pretty spooky... I really like the calm...

ManifestSilver
Sun May 11, 2008 8:00 pm

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Thanks, Jason! To everyone : I only spent one...

ManifestSilver
Sun May 11, 2008 8:09 pm

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Some of the melodies sound very "plotted i...

EspacX
Tue May 13, 2008 6:56 am

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Notes: - The pad in the beginning is nice, all...

Davidaase
Tue May 13, 2008 8:38 am

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ManifestSilver wrote:Some of the melodies sound...

EspacX
Tue May 13, 2008 9:41 am

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ManifestSilver wrote:Some of the melodies sound...

ManifestSilver
Tue May 13, 2008 7:18 pm

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Thanks for the advice! It's been a while since ...

Experiment11
Tue May 13, 2008 7:30 pm

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Manifest does it again! Nice work on this one,...

ManifestSilver
Tue May 13, 2008 8:40 pm

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It's killing me! I only had one night to finis...


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