Living for the Light (and) Shine | Track Reworks | DnB

Ok, so I had a long vacation from working on any of my music, but earlier today I thought I would work on these two tracks and try to change them regarding the feedback I got last time. I reworked the snare and kick, did a little bit of EQ work on some of the synths and bass, and adjusted the volumes of each instrument. I also tried to "gritty up" the bass, removed the white noise, and changed a couple of pattern arrangements. So, any opinions and/or constructive criticism on these versions would be appreciated.

See, that's why I post always as first. This po...

Thanks mate!

Living for the Light: Overall some to my ears u...

e-Gloomy-nations wrote:Only one remark : your f...

Last edited by evergloe on Sat May 12, 2018 9:44 am, edited 4 times in total.

So, I took a guess as to what part you meant an...

At about 0:44 and 2:55 when the beat comes in (...

Thanks mate, but which track are you talking ab...

That's it! I posted the previous before hearing...

Oh right!

I'll give some extra props to you on the drums!...

Cheers for the feedback!

Unfortunately I'm on this equipment not able to...

(listening only to the newer versions) ==Livin...

Thanks for your feedback steevm. I would like t...

evergloe wrote:e-Gloomy-nations wrote:Only one ...

By "hook" I meant the "melody". And by "main bi...

evergloe wrote:By "hook" I meant the "melody". ...

The hook starts at 2:11 and the body or "main b...

evergloe wrote:The hook starts at 2:11 and the ...

Yes, I mean pick two songs from my SC list.

Hey, I'm listening to the whole set again, and ...

evergloe wrote:Thanks for your feedback steevm....

Thanks steevm again for your very descriptive, ...

evergloe wrote:(P.S. - A World Away is the EP n...

Ok, so I threw this together quickly... Is this...

Yes, that's the idea. The filtered bit is a bit...

I had several days off from my music, but today...

I like it. You still have the string machines p...

evergloe wrote:I had several days off from my m...

Cheers. When I have some time I'll try implemen...

Ok, so again, I've been really lazy and haven't...

Yeah, that's better! Removing a bit of the pads...

Ok, cool. I'll try turning the drums up, etc., ...

I made a LANDR master so you can have a listen ...

I reworked some of the mixing for "Living for t...

Last edited by evergloe on Fri Jun 15, 2018 1:43 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Ok, so I had another listen, and figured you mi...

IMO, Shine sounds really good now. Pretty much ...

Cool, thanks!!

now the synth needs to be louder too, it should...

sql_error_uname wrote:now the synth needs to be...

I worked some more on "Living for the Light", a...

Sounds really professional, evergloe ! But if ...

Ok, so I went and made a bit of an intro and an...

Very beautiful evergloe ! Adding fills is a goo...

Last edited by evergloe on Tue Jul 17, 2018 5:38 pm, edited 6 times in total.

Sooooooo...... I changed a lot of stuff in Livi...

It's becoming more and more uplifting, very nic...

I like the reworked sounds. Only thing I wonder...

I know this thread is getting really, really ol...

Oooh, I like the FX on the melodic "bell" or "p...