Summer Dance Project - It's A Mess [Wave Pop/Dark Wave/EDM]]

[summerdanceproject]

More unfinished work. This is a first skeletal structure of a new song. First version, needs a lot work (vocals, drops, more variety, and on and on). Soon ive got a week of holiday. Lets see if i could bring the collection of unfinished songs a bit forward;-). But until then, I would be glad about an assessment if everything is so far harmonious...


NEW VERSION UPDATE 13.7.2018 (Name changed to "It's A Mess"):

Pop Version (29.11.2018):


Original Mix (16.07.2018):


Club Mix 31.5.2018 :


Radio Edit 23.05.2018:
Radio Edit (No Bridge, no experimental singing):

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Hey man, a very good night from here in Belgium...

[summerdanceproject]

Thank you Gloomy! It needs time and inspiration...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

charliekay74 wrote:in sunny andalusia on holida...

[Deceiver]

Some nice flourishes (of guitar?) Maybe lower t...

[steevm]

Regarding the composition, it's all harmonious,...

[summerdanceproject]

steevm wrote:Regarding the composition, it's al...

[Chipps]

Charlie, I'm really diggin' the feel of this tr...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Chipps wrote:Charlie, I'm really diggin' the fe...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks Chipps, Thanks, Gloomy ! I think it is ...

[steevm]

charliekay74 wrote:"I think you could add a lit...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks stevm and IRelevant! I took your assessm...

[summerdanceproject]

New Version: -added some additional keys undern...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Listening to your SC-link at the moment.. I'll...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks Gloomy. Greetings from sunny malaga to y...

[summerdanceproject]

Made a radio edit now: removed the bridge and o...

[Glasman]

hey charlie, just jumped to the radio edit , s...

[Glasman]

hey charlie, just jumped to the radio edit , s...

[summerdanceproject]

Thank you Glasman for your feedback! There will...

[steevm]

Listening this time, I wondered if the beat sho...

[Omegeist]

The clap is completely lost at 1:05 for example...

[summerdanceproject]

Thanks Steevm, thank you Omegeist. I implemente...

[Omegeist]

Just listened to the new version One more thing...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Very cool version, I should keep it like that.....

[summerdanceproject]

Hey Gloomy, thanks! But you know that I can not...

[summerdanceproject]

New Original Version: -replaced guitar parts in...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

mmm, I think by editing these things, your voca...

[summerdanceproject]

Good morning Gloomy and thanks for listening, e...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Good morning of course You're very welcome ! ...

[summerdanceproject]

Changes: -new compressor settings for vocals, b...

[summerdanceproject]

Have changed the drums, clap on snare and remov...

[summerdanceproject]

New Version: -new compressor settings on bass, ...

[summerdanceproject]

New Pop Version (maybe a B-Side;-) ): -totally ...