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heitchew
Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:31 am

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New Song - Can I have some feedback?

This is my first FL song. I play guitar, write, and sing. I hope you like it.
If anyone would like to improve this song, please let me know. Proper mastering is a pain in the butt. I think I've got it to about 80% final. Any input on mastering or proper levels or mixing... anything would be appreciated. I've had FL Studio for years and originally bought it just to help me write. I would make a basic drum and bass track and do my thing. Hearing the demo's that came with the latest version has really inspired me. I went on vacation 3 weeks ago and learned how to use it (sort of) via my laptop. It's so liberating not needing an entire band to create new songs. Thanks for taking the time to hear my song.

-Troy


Song Background: BEAUTY QUEEN

When I was in elementary school there was a girl named Barbie. Red curly hair, special shoes and metal back brace. Not too pretty. I've thought of her often and wondered how her life had turned out. Did she morph into a butterfly? I couldn't knock the vision of her coming home everyday to a loving mother who would tell her just how beautiful she was. I hope she got the love she deserved. This song is for her.
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Last edited by heitchew on Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:19 am, edited 2 times in total.

Morgan King
Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:47 am

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Really nice track man, and that's coming from s...

ManifestSilver
Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:59 am

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Morgan King wrote:Really nice track man, and th...

heitchew
Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:30 am

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Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad I could...

Drekk
Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:29 am

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Nice track man. I would dedfinitely put it into...

heitchew
Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:25 pm

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How I did it: The Electric, Acoustic, Lead Gui...

rmfought
Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:08 pm

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Very nice track man, thanks for the insight int...

dh2576
Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:06 pm

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yes please post flp! sounds great! love ur musi...

heitchew
Wed Jun 18, 2008 3:15 am

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FLP Zipped file can be found at http://www.duhz...


GGonz
Thu Jun 19, 2008 5:50 am

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Amazing. This would be the ultimate FL Studio...

heitchew
Thu Jun 19, 2008 4:59 pm

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There was an error in the flp file. I had edis...

ManifestSilver
Thu Jun 19, 2008 5:13 pm

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Is your name a homophone psuedonym for "Hate Yo...

heitchew
Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:57 pm

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Actually, it's my last name. German derivation...

ManifestSilver
Thu Jun 19, 2008 10:04 pm

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Would you prefer a strange name or avatar? Is ...

Jed I Knight
Thu Jun 19, 2008 11:16 pm

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Liked it a lot, but the drums had a few timing ...

arcandor
Thu Jun 19, 2008 11:33 pm

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Wow great job - sounds excellent

heitchew
Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:35 am

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Liked it a lot, but the drums had a few timing ...

SpencerSteel
Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:03 pm

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Good job matey - reminded me of Counting Crows ...

davidbuhau
Fri Jun 20, 2008 7:39 pm

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properly snazzy yo... my friends who do slight...

heitchew
Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:43 pm

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remix -add, subtract - trance it out, whatever ...

joene
Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:52 pm

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This is great! I really liked it. It sounds a b...

heitchew
Sat Jun 21, 2008 1:21 am

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Anyone/everyone is invited to make this track b...


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