I'm making this song, basically for a portfolio with projects that I mixed. I started this as a jingle/instrumental track, but then, a few days ago I decided to make a song out of it. So I wrote lyrics and recorded them (badly, i know, i'm not a singer
) to have a vocal demo that I can give to a singer. And I made A LOT pitch correction which makes it on some parts very unnatural sounding (just to make a clear melody reference).I'm not experienced in texting and making melodies for vocals. Also, my english is not the best so I hope you can help me out to improve the lyrics in text and melody before I give it to a singer who finally will sing the song