I can definitely dig the Empty Morning feeling of this track. It currently sounds more like a sketch or a snapshot than a finished and polished track, with some rough edges here and there. I'm sure you could extract the essence of the emotion you've captures so well, and rework it with a bit more thought to detail and a focus on telling the story of your bus ride. Maybe even some ambient sounds as the world goes by?
In particular, I think spreading out the elements a bit more would contribute to this, so that there's just a bit more of a slow and gentle flow to the piece. IMO this is worth pursuing further.
Empty Morning | FLM project | Jazz
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