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[K4LCMR]

Hey all been taking my time on some tracks, and this is one I'm currently working on atm.

Heres the original:



Here is with me singing. Which sounds better.
I do plan to add more layers and have it evolve further.



Here is where I am at now (current) :




Lyrics:



Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me

Verse 1

King like now dim the lights
do as benjamin did flying kites
lifes intimate sorta like climbings heights


Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me


verse 2

gotta love the system sorta like religion
meant to keep you fishin wishin for a mission
never be put into submision
try to walk in my shoes



Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me

verse 3

mixed in the midst the ending has a twist
yet to you its in the midst
fight for nothing
yet call it loving
nothing like me can fight me


Thanks again as always.

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