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K4LCMR
Thu Dec 20, 2018 4:22 am

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carousel | Need advice | Mixture

Hey all been taking my time on some tracks, and this is one I'm currently working on atm.

Heres the original:

https://soundcloud.com/kingforlife/carousel


Here is with me singing. Which sounds better.
I do plan to add more layers and have it evolve further.

https://soundcloud.com/kingforlife/version-2


Here is where I am at now (current) :

https://soundcloud.com/kingforlife/carousel-1



Lyrics:



Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me

Verse 1

King like now dim the lights
do as benjamin did flying kites
lifes intimate sorta like climbings heights


Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me


verse 2

gotta love the system sorta like religion
meant to keep you fishin wishin for a mission
never be put into submision
try to walk in my shoes



Chorus:

who are you to you
who are you to me
I try to see
why can you
you and me

verse 3

mixed in the midst the ending has a twist
yet to you its in the midst
fight for nothing
yet call it loving
nothing like me can fight me


Thanks again as always.
Last edited by K4LCMR on Fri Dec 21, 2018 2:51 pm, edited 4 times in total.


K4LCMR
Thu Dec 20, 2018 5:59 am

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Re: carousel | Need advice | Mixture

Thanks gloom as always. There are so many ways ...

K4LCMR
Fri Dec 21, 2018 4:37 am

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Re: carousel | Need advice | Mixture

Been updated lemme know if that's a good direct...



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