Fight the machines | opinions very welcome | Synthwave

[Bruellbart]

So this is my first more serious try with FL Studio. I'm a beginner and still have to learn A LOT so I'm very thankful for every advice. Barely EQed and haven't used any effects besides Vocodex and Kickstart because I didn't want to make it worse with so-called corrections only for the sake of it. Learn slow and steady with the help of more experienced minds.

But I do like the track a lot, so here it is:



Things I've noticed myself:
- still a lot of clipping even though I gainstaged carefully (-15db each VST with SPAN)
- the starting lead may be too bright
- didn't make enough room for the frequency spectrum of each instrument when the parts collide
- but had to end it somewhere and it sounds okay to my beginners ears

I'm looking forward to every reply, may it be positive, negative or constructive criticism

[e-Gloomy-nations]

I think it was already a wonderful track.. But...

[Bruellbart]

Thank you I'm looking forward to your feedbac...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

* very cool beginning * fat bass * lovely melod...

[Bruellbart]

* you start too soon with the break (insert 8 b...

[steevm]

Bruellbart wrote:- the starting lead may be too...

[Bruellbart]

Thank you so much for your honest opinion, I'll...

[FredCoince]

it's impressive. Maybe the synthe at 0:20 appro...

[Bruellbart]

Thanks for your opinion and glad you liked it

[Monkey C]

Wow! This is some good shit! Maybe that synth ...

[donkeytugger]

steevm wrote:Bruellbart wrote:- the starting le...

[Bruellbart]

For this track particularly I won't change anyt...

[Glasman]

Think you did a fine job with this track, thi...

[steevm]

donkeytugger wrote: Aye, there's definitely one...

[Omoide]

I really like the vibes on this one. I would ...

[Bruellbart]

steevm wrote:donkeytugger wrote: Aye, there's d...