Need Some Feedback On This Track

[Hidden Secret]

I am recently working on this track. And Now i am confuse about how it sounds as i listen it for a long time and it seems a little bit boring to me.I think someone who listen this track for the first time can give me some true advice on how it sounds or what should i change.
So please give me some comment/feedback about it. Should i keep this track like this or should i change or add something. And how i can improve the mixing or it is okay . I am waiting for some reply

[e-Gloomy-nations]

+ nice beginning + great melody + mighty fine b...

[Hidden Secret]

Thanks Gloomy . But i am out of idea how to va...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Hidden Secret wrote:Thanks Gloomy . But i am o...

[Whyteup]

i think this mostly needs a good mixing to bala...

[Jan Jensen [DK]]

I love the sound, the piano, the guitar (i thin...

[Hidden Secret]

Thank you guys for all your comments and advice...

[Chipps]

What a FUN track! I was boppin the whole time ...