new thing, would like to get some critique on what I currently have.

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TranceCrafter
Mon Apr 26, 2021 9:01 pm

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new thing, would like to get some critique on what I currently have.

These are original lyrics I wrote after spending the past 6 or so years learning about how to properly write poetry. how to read music etc...
recorded this in about 2 minutes and made the melody in the fl studio piano roll really fast too.

my skills with music theory and singing/recording vocals has been steadily improving since about 2010.

enjoy!

Through the ashes

of a night sky

comes a morning

cloudless in the light


and I wonder where you went


So poetic,

like the words you said

can't forget it

it's been in my head


and I've tried to reach...

I'm reaching into my past again
Reasons (vocal test).mp3
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WasteFifty
Wed Apr 28, 2021 9:25 am

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Re: new thing, would like to get some critique on what I currently have.

Hello Trance Crafter I listened and tried to c...
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TranceCrafter
Sat May 01, 2021 9:07 pm

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Re: new thing, would like to get some critique on what I currently have.

was going through most of my lyrical stuff and ...
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TranceCrafter
Sun May 02, 2021 1:52 am

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Re: new thing, would like to get some critique on what I currently have.

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