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e-Gloomy-nations
Thu Nov 18, 2021 11:59 am

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Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

V2, without poem: further down the page, new link.

hey folks,

I have decided to participate in the Ambient Online Compilation nr 15.
The whole seems finished, but I still need your opinion, what could be improved and what do you think?

Here's the private link:



I am open to all suggestions.

Thank you, and have a nice day.

Dear greetings,

Jan.

Edit: here is the finished version, mastered by Ambient Online:


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A Dream Within a Dream
By Edgar Allan Poe

Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
So much let me avow —
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
grains of the golden sand —
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep — while I weep!
Oh God! Can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
Oh God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
Last edited by e-Gloomy-nations on Mon Dec 20, 2021 10:58 am, edited 2 times in total.

Kostas53
Thu Nov 18, 2021 12:30 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Interesting. Like how you handle the synths. Th...

steevm
Thu Nov 18, 2021 12:41 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

It works for me. As Kostas says, the music comp...


Thomekk
Fri Nov 19, 2021 11:49 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Absolutely great! Has this certain shaman (folk...

Thomekk
Fri Nov 19, 2021 11:52 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Made me think of some work by Jah Wobble (bu...

e-Gloomy-nations
Sat Nov 20, 2021 5:50 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Thanks a lot Thomas, very nice of you. But it m...

Thomekk
Sat Nov 20, 2021 10:59 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Hey Jan, I guess your comment here was meant t...

steevm
Sat Nov 20, 2021 12:35 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

I thought they both sounded pretty good, but I ...

MvR
Sun Nov 21, 2021 8:59 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

e-Gloomy-nations wrote: ↑Sat Nov 20, 2021 5:50 ...


timex_cme
Thu Nov 25, 2021 6:19 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

A fine piece of ambient music, and a great come...

e-Gloomy-nations
Fri Nov 26, 2021 1:29 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

The Ambient Online Compilations will have a Glo...


Hrache
Fri Nov 26, 2021 6:38 pm

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

if this was your voice, then I need to say that...

e-Gloomy-nations
Sun Nov 28, 2021 5:25 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

No, that's not my voice, that's why I left it o...

e-Gloomy-nations
Sat Dec 18, 2021 4:29 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

And here is the final version, mastered by Ambi...


e-Gloomy-nations
Mon Dec 20, 2021 10:59 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

Thank you very much Voodooboom for the listen a...

pararealist
Mon Dec 20, 2021 11:32 am

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Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)

e-Gloomy-nations wrote: ↑Mon Dec 20, 2021 10:59...




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