V2, without poem: further down the page, new link.
hey folks,
I have decided to participate in the Ambient Online Compilation nr 15.
The whole seems finished, but I still need your opinion, what could be improved and what do you think?
Here's the private link:
I am open to all suggestions.
Thank you, and have a nice day.
Dear greetings,
Jan.
Edit: here is the finished version, mastered by Ambient Online:
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A Dream Within a Dream
By Edgar Allan Poe
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
So much let me avow —
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.
I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
grains of the golden sand —
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep — while I weep!
Oh God! Can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
Oh God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)
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Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)
Last edited by e-Gloomy-nations on Mon Dec 20, 2021 10:58 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Interesting. Like how you handle the synths. Th...
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It works for me. As Kostas says, the music comp...
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Thank you so much, guys.
The distortion, I did...
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Absolutely great!
Has this certain shaman (folk...
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Made me think of some work by Jah Wobble
(bu...
Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)
Thanks a lot Thomas, very nice of you. But it m...
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Hey Jan,
I guess your comment here was meant t...
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I thought they both sounded pretty good, but I ...
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e-Gloomy-nations wrote: ↑Sat Nov 20, 2021 5:50 ...
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Thanks a lot guys,
Yeah, I looked it up Mark, ...
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A fine piece of ambient music, and a great come...
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The Ambient Online Compilations will have a Glo...
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V2 is indeed the best
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if this was your voice, then I need to say that...
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No, that's not my voice, that's why I left it o...
Re: Gloomy - Within a Dream (Ambient)
And here is the final version, mastered by Ambi...
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Really cool sound. I love that vibe
Reall...
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Thank you very much Voodooboom for the listen a...
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e-Gloomy-nations wrote: ↑Mon Dec 20, 2021 10:59...
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Strange? Why?
Glad you liked it, brother.
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I didn't know you also made videogames!
It ...