Exosphere | Give me criticism! | Trap

[CSydR]

What's up boys!
I'm seeing the chance of getting some sneaky advice from some people here that made it further than me so far when it comes to making music. I wanna learn. Hit me up with some advice/criticism. Roast me if you need. It should be noted that I tried to break my little creative block by only using DX10. Of course you're welcome to leave some general words instead as well if you want to.



Thanks in advance, love y'all

[e-Gloomy-nations]

cool track, I wish it was longer

[CSydR]

Gloomer wrote:cool track, I wish it was longer ...

[Aleix Fontanet]

It has a nice vibe to it, and great you're maki...

[CSydR]

Aleix Fontanet wrote:It has a nice vibe to it, ...

[Crenado]

Just as a music fan, before the trumpets kick i...

[CSydR]

Crenado wrote:Just as a music fan, before the t...

[steevm]

I think it's a delay on your synth; anyway the ...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:I think it's a delay on your synth...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:Might be the reverb too Could be,...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:CSydR wrote:Might be the reverb to...

[CSydR]

Hey guys! It's been a while. Life is keeping me...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

it sounds nice already, would do good in a thri...

[Aleix Fontanet]

Now that's an improvement, and it's a nice tune...

[steevm]

Given that your main riff is extremely catchy, ...

[CSydR]

Thanks for the nice words! Truly motivating. J...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:Not sure what you mean with contras...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:CSydR wrote:Not sure what you mean...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote: Greetings to the dark (and cold) A...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:CSydR wrote: Greetings to the dark...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:That looks bloooooody cold! Saw -20...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:CSydR wrote:That looks bloooooody ...

[CSydR]

Alright, finally found some time for the next o...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Chill and cool, nice lounge.. I liked it. Keep ...

[CSydR]

e-Gloomy-nations wrote:Chill and cool, nice lou...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

CSydR wrote:Should I really open a new thread e...

[CSydR]

e-Gloomy-nations wrote:CSydR wrote:Should I rea...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:e-Gloomy-nations wrote:Btw, better ...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:Lemme hear what ya'll think! Ret...

[CSydR]

steevm wrote:CSydR wrote:Lemme hear what ya'll ...

[steevm]

CSydR wrote:Hope you're enjoying your spa alrea...