Needing some feedback

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi I have re- written most of the lyrics to this track, I posted this about this 12 months ago, but needed some more work..
previous feedback was the structure was a bit strange etc, but have worked on the bass the drums and vocals and added some more instruments etc..
I' m not sure about the vocals in some places with lower tones in some areas and also, the quality of the singing as I have struggled to get this right!
I feel that the mixing is near enough but not exactly sure as I am trying to get better at this.
Only just got back into production as I have moved states and had a very long break!

[clint]

The music is really good! The vocals are really...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

It's not bad, but it also not that good. I shou...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi Clint, Thanks heaps I' ll give it a try and ...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi Gloomer, again thanks heaps for your help, y...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

The Mad Maltese wrote:how' s things ? My heal...

[Michael Mckeon]

not my style, could change the speed of your ac...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi Gloomer, Sorry to hear that mate, i hope u r...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi Michael, thanks for dropping in, yeah that m...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

The Mad Maltese wrote:Hi Gloomer, Sorry to hear...

[steevm]

clint wrote:The vocals [...] are not cohesive w...

[LukaszWajdzik]

Hi. I will keep it short. This track is very ch...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hey Steev how r u ? Thanks for dropping in, yea...

[The Mad Maltese]

Hi ok not sure how to fix that, I thought it ma...