Move (NEW finished track)

[e-Gloomy-nations]

6th track of my new album : "Stronger". A work in progress, so I need all the advice I can get. You'll hear my own voice for once.. I'm getting frustrated because you have to move ! Time is near, take action now, because the Earth is going down, down, down.. Made in FL-studio 20. Please enjoy and thanks in advance. Cheers, Gloomy.

UPDATE : TRACK IS FINISHED, Thanks for the help and the listens !!

Here a link to Youtube with some simple animations :

[Jon Indoors]

I'm digging that sexy voice, Gloomy For me ...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Thank you, dear Jon. Yes, I have a very sexy v...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Okay, I only had one comment on my pre-track.. ...

[JackySwing]

I liked the first minute better than the second...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Hey hey Jacky, thanks for the honest feedback,...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

UPDATE : I tried to change the track completel...

[olatheswift]

I have to say you have an amazing production ra...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Thanks bro, I really appreciate your visit.. An...

[DawsonMusic]

This is a cool track, I doubt anyone would know...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Thank you very much Shaw, this is awesome feedb...