Gloomy - Give Me A Task - Extended Version - NEW TRACK

[e-Gloomy-nations]

So, I got some comments that the original track was too short, so I made an extended version from it. But it really sounds like one big mess, so I need all the help I can get. Please let me know what I can do differently. Thanks in advance, Gloomy.

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Take good care everyone!!!

PS, THIS IS THE EXTENDED VERSION :

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Give Me A Task.mid This is a midifile from the...

[steevm]

Something like this? Task completed.mp3

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Yeah, something like that.. But it seems very s...

[donkeytugger]

I do like the underlying progression - very goo...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

donkeytugger wrote: ↑Fri Feb 14, 2020 9:46 pm I...

[Audio Warfare]

Sounds cool, I like it. the little vocal snipp...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Thanks, AW, but duh! ... I already knew that...

[Sirous]

Hi Gloomy, to give you another idea were you c...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Hey Sirous, thank you very much for your kind w...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

How about this ? Added bass, and used your m...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Okay, I call it a day, worked many hours on thi...

[steevm]

I think the track sounds a lot better than the ...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

hey steevm, thanks for the great answer, my fri...

[Glasman]

Like the operatic vocal , that fits the track r...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Thank you Glasman, I will do that. Appreciate y...