Feedback needed

[Originaltsapp]

Feedback Needed.mp3

I am trying to make quite a simple beat, but I am not completely sure if it needs to sound better because I will be adding lyrics.
If you guys got any takes, then please tell me. Any feedback appreciated!

[JoexLy Music]

feels just a bit empty, nice melody and chord p...

[e-Gloomy-nations]

Yeah, cute little track. But it feels empty ind...

[creativetrance]

It's a nice tune if you'd add vocals. Clean or ...

[Originaltsapp]

JoexLy Music wrote: ↑Sat May 27, 2023 9:19 pm f...

[Originaltsapp]

e-Gloomy-nations wrote: ↑Sun May 28, 2023 7:00 ...

[Originaltsapp]

creativetrance wrote: ↑Tue May 30, 2023 3:49 pm...

[WasteFifty]

Dark, sad, the piano could be softer. ps I wi...

[Originaltsapp]

WasteFifty wrote: ↑Thu Jun 01, 2023 8:09 pm Dar...

[WasteFifty]

Thanks for reply My e-mail is wastefifty@wastef...

[WasteFifty]

I cant wait anymore so I turn to other project.

[WasteFifty]

have the perfect lyrics on nasty piece of paper...

[WasteFifty]

I want to add I only listened it once so it is ...

[Originaltsapp]

WasteFifty wrote: ↑Fri Jun 02, 2023 7:42 am I w...

[WasteFifty]

Please send me an e-mail. Username is enough on...

[Originaltsapp]

WasteFifty wrote: ↑Mon Jun 05, 2023 4:51 pm Ple...