Things I have done wrong-(if you have any others please let me know so this list wont be lonely)
1 ) *Fixed*
2 ) Better synths are needed for some things
3 ) The clip is shorter than most peoples attention spans.
4 ) *Fixed*
5 ) Add reverse crashes for buildup
6 ) Fix the volume for some of the synths, some are way too quiet.
7 ) Fix the awful snare
8 )*Did not work*
9 ) Add experimental perc
10) Mix the track
11) Mix the track AFTER you finish the song you idiot
12) Fix the volume automation on the buildup *Hopefully fixed*
13) Make the non-existent bass line exist
Also, for those who are wondering, all the synths are of my creation except one of the super saws I used from Sylenth1. For those who are curious, the synths I used are as follows - LennarDigital Sylenth1(plucks and super saws), Xfer Serum(wubs, super saws, leads), and Sytrus(White noise).
Any advice for what to do other than what was mentioned would be appreciated!
Here is the SC link so you do not have to scroll down so much to find it....